which sentence uses parallel structure correctly

ATI TEAS 7

ATI TEAS 7 English practice test

1. Which sentence uses parallel structure correctly?

A. I enjoy reading, watching movies, and spending time with friends.
B. Reading, watching movies, and spending time with friends are all activities I enjoy.
C. I like to read, watch movies, and spend time with friends.
D. Reading, movies, and friends are all things I enjoy.

Correct answer: B

Rationale: Parallel structure means using the same grammatical form for elements in a list. Option (B) uses parallel gerunds ('reading,' 'watching,' 'spending'), making it the correct choice. The other options have inconsistencies in the form of the listed activities, making them grammatically incorrect. Option (A) starts with 'I enjoy' but then switches to '-ing' verbs. Option (C) changes from 'like' to '-ing' verbs, breaking parallelism. Option (D) lists 'reading' correctly but then switches to singular nouns ('movies,' 'friends'), which is not parallel.

2. Select the noun that the underlined adjectives describe: 'Two weeks after his surgery, Henry felt strong and healthy.'

A. weeks
B. his
C. surgery
D. Henry

Correct answer: D

Rationale: The correct answer is D (Henry) because the adjectives 'strong and healthy' describe 'Henry.' In this sentence, 'Henry' is the subject being described as strong and healthy, not 'weeks,' 'his,' or 'surgery.' While 'weeks' and 'surgery' are nouns mentioned in the sentence, they are not the nouns being described by the adjectives in question. 'His' is a possessive pronoun referring to Henry and does not match the criteria of being directly described by the adjectives 'strong and healthy.' Therefore, 'Henry' is the noun that the adjectives specifically describe in this context.

3. Which sentence uses parentheses correctly?

A. The suspect was seen driving a red car (a witness reported).
B. The movie (released in 2022) received critical acclaim.
C. The restaurant offers a variety of dishes (including vegetarian options).
D. All participants (must register by Friday) will receive a free gift.

Correct answer: B

Rationale: The correct use of parentheses is to provide additional non-essential information to the main sentence. In option B, 'released in 2022' is additional detail about the movie but not necessary for the sentence's core meaning. Options A, C, and D could function without parentheses without affecting their essential message, making them incorrect uses of parentheses in this context. Therefore, choice B is the correct answer.

4. We rejoiced as 'hackers.' Which of the following is the best revision of the sentence?

A. NO CHANGE
B. To a nagging technology problem, we rejoiced as 'hackers.'
C. We rejoiced when we figured out how to 'hack' a solution to a nagging technological problem.
D. To 'hack' our way to a solution, we had to rejoice.

Correct answer: C

Rationale: Option C is the best revision as it provides clarity and context to the sentence. It conveys the idea that the individuals rejoiced after successfully finding a creative solution to a persistent technological issue. Choice A is incorrect as it leaves the sentence unchanged without adding any context. Choice B introduces the phrase 'nagging technology problem,' which alters the original meaning and is not as concise as the correct answer. Choice D alters the sentence structure and does not effectively convey the intended meaning of rejoicing after finding a solution.

5. Which of the following facts would be the most relevant to include here?

A. NO CHANGE; best as written
B. was another activist group that
C. had a lot of members that
D. was another school that

Correct answer: B

Rationale: Option B provides relevant context by specifying that the BPP was another activist group. This clarification helps to establish a parallel between the BPP and the NAACP in terms of their function and purpose. Choice C is incorrect as the number of members is not the key point being compared in the sentence. Choice D is incorrect as it introduces an unrelated comparison involving schools, which is not relevant to the context provided in the sentence.